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Smitty said "
Slide 2, Paragraph one reads:
"When
this technology is implemented there is a need for follow up to find
out the positives and negatives of the technology and see how to better
implement the technology."
At
the end of the paragraph you almost repeat this statement. I would
suggest perhaps rewording the terms positive and negative to "benefits"
and "challenges."
Slide
3, Paragraph 1 seems to suggest being stand offish as a mentor or lead
teacher. I would like to hear the validation or refutation in your
experience
to thi point.
Slide 7, Paragraph 3 one spelling error to repair.
Drew said "Your presentation looks good. You've got some really great info in the
first few slides that I assume comes from your Lit Review. I think your
actual work in the CBR is really great and I think I'd like to see that
portion of the presentation expanded.
I'd love to know more about how your teachers felt about the whole
thing. If you have some quotes or something from them, that could be
really enlightening. "
Vivian said, great image, of students and educator engaged in technology, it would be great to add an image of a classroom lacking technology to contrast and support your research questions.
All of the feedback was great and much of it was taken to heart and changed to help my project. It is great to know that there are colleagues that are will to go above and beyond to help a classmate. THANKS!